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Review Detail of Flaamwing in The 70th Awakened

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Flaamwing
FlaamwingLv124yrFlaamwing

Main Character acts like a rude jackass, and makes incredibly stupid decisions with no thought about the consequences. Making it too hard to identify with him and enjoy the story. On the plus side the technical writing is very well done. Too early to really say anything about world development.

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The 70th Awakened

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I thank you for your honest input this helped a lot for the direction I am going to take with my story.