Review Detail of Lola_Loquacious in Gay sex

Item: Gay sex
Rating: 2

Review detail

Lola_LoquaciousLv34yrLola_Loquacious

I can definitely see the potential of this story, but the writing needs work or at least someone to edit and correct mistakes and grammatical errors.

Alijah_Shepherd_3965

Liked by 8 people

Gay_ShirLv1Gay_Shir

I wrote this when I was 11 on my other account but thank you for your opinion

3yr