I don't like the mc. 👎👎 it feels like a wimpy kid trying to be a badass character. And he's like a tail following his so call3d onee samaaaa!! Integra 😆 he's pretty much us3less even with all his advantages. Talks like a merciless person but in truth just a coward

I dont really have problem with the idea of the novel, but the thing that messes up what could be a decent or amazing novel is the MC, who is an ***** mentally but behaves like a little child with no goals or vision, he instantly wishish to protect the first person he sees as family and in this case is the child version of Integra Hellsing. I can deal with any problem from a novel but if the MC is a beta male or a cringe then its a huge no for me. If author develops the MC into a more badass main character who strives for his goals and doesnt behave childish or weak then get back at me.

Yeah, it's like some kind of brain disease for people who are trying to write something, always pus.sy mc or yeah retarde.d one like in this story for example his wishes were **** and he wasted one time opportunity having some useful wishes. And I just can't understand why in almost all stories with reincarnated Mc instantly becomes attracted to so called family even though they are complete strangers(probably because authors always think that it's best idea to reincarnate some kind of shut it loser guy who lives in grandparents basement and is afraid of even talking to women, and after reincarnation they only seek pus.sy because yeah they died virgins) ... Instead of focusing on improving himself and his power/knowledge Mc focus on useless bonds with his fake family. Yeah this review is focused not only on this story but also on 99% of stories on this site. So I would strongly suggest not reading this story because you will be influenced by this kind of idiotic Mc.

Please continue this and not drop after a couple of chapters just reading three chapters and I'm hooked.

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This story is really lacking. The author fails to describe characters and assumes we should know who he is talking about. The dialogue had zero effort put into it, he gets One Piece crap powers and he still acts like a child in the second world hop. His original wishes don't even matter when the MC can just create his own powers/items that differ from the world he's in. I wasted a lot of time on this fic and recommend others to avoid this. It'll make you sad and angry towards the little effort put into this fic and the slight pedophilia tendencies of the MC.

A support from fellow countrymen. Keep going buddy, no need to care bout the stupid haters! I hope you will not give up writing and keep going. Merdeka~

Mec précis si c'est put*in de Harem, j'ai pas envie de perdre mon temps sur des histoires écrits avec la bite. 🙂 Mec précis si c'est put*in de Harem, j'ai pas envie de perdre mon temps sur des histoires écrits avec la bite. 🙂

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