Review Detail of HeavenlyStick in Fullmetal Alchemist? in Marvel Universe

The author is undeniably a talented writer and has actually made the mc a half believable 'scientist' as an alchemist should be. Its a refreshing premise I hope the author sticks too and expands upon more no matter what the super op mc and harem community demand and favour. My only real gripe is that the journal like writing style creates some tonal and pacing 'whiplash' that are probably only going to be present in these early chapters.