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amaturewriter
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This is an author with a dumb **** syndrome....Like the books written well right but the many BS here...example..MC has lovers that are goddesses and yet he had be reborn into BS life, twice....and his memory erased..why? Now look...if the MC regains his memory then it'd would be Ok..also dont make him some forgiving *****..he was tortured. SO he would be cruel..so make him you know..Ok with killing murders, rapists and evil dudes...Make him OP and dont neuter him..dont make him a *****..add some bakugo bash..that **** is and asshole and midoriya is a *****

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THE TRIALS: Path Toward Godhood.[MY HERO ACADEMIA] (MATURE CONTENT)

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RedLaw
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The original show must have really frustrated you. As for the memory loss, you'll see.

amaturewriter
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the show was epic-no doubt.......its midoriyas *****iness and forgiveness that I hate..bakugo was an ass..he midoriya tortured mentally and physically....leaving scars...and yet midoriya was a ***** trying to be his friend..a person that told him to die and never said thank you even when he saved him...Now I dont want some evil MC..but atleast make him you know..smart and proper..kills evil..saves innocent

RedLaw:The original show must have really frustrated you. As for the memory loss, you'll see.
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

Also add some romance and fluff..will still read and judge....but just dont make MC a *****/womanizer.....good luck

RedLaw:The original show must have really frustrated you. As for the memory loss, you'll see.
ACrazySheep
ACrazySheepLv5ACrazySheep

why so many "....." wtf

amaturewriter:the show was epic-no doubt.......its midoriyas *****iness and forgiveness that I hate..bakugo was an ass..he midoriya tortured mentally and physically....leaving scars...and yet midoriya was a ***** trying to be his friend..a person that told him to die and never said thank you even when he saved him...Now I dont want some evil MC..but atleast make him you know..smart and proper..kills evil..saves innocent
God_of_Perverts
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After hearing how Midoriya acts I never watched the anime or read the manga. I've only read fan fic of it.

amaturewriter:the show was epic-no doubt.......its midoriyas *****iness and forgiveness that I hate..bakugo was an ass..he midoriya tortured mentally and physically....leaving scars...and yet midoriya was a ***** trying to be his friend..a person that told him to die and never said thank you even when he saved him...Now I dont want some evil MC..but atleast make him you know..smart and proper..kills evil..saves innocent
ruiruihuang
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کمق

RedLaw:The original show must have really frustrated you. As for the memory loss, you'll see.
TheTrueGilgamesh
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I see a kindred spirit in you same herw😏

God_of_Perverts:After hearing how Midoriya acts I never watched the anime or read the manga. I've only read fan fic of it.
DearCompanion
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☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.

Guad
GuadLv6Guad

wow talk about an agressive entitled reader...

Fly2Sky
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😑

RedLaw:The original show must have really frustrated you. As for the memory loss, you'll see.
Monke_Wylad
Monke_WyladLv11Monke_Wylad

The reason why I didn't continue reading it, because of the summary, I don't understand why writers needs to bring the cringie cliché bad childhood MC, bohoo I need to cry for the MC. 😑

RobertBoss
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Wait since when was the godesses his lovers?

amaturewriter
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first chp [lovers were godlike beings]

RobertBoss:Wait since when was the godesses his lovers?
RobertBoss
RobertBossLv4RobertBoss

Hmmm....but it doesnt say they're lovers. I mean how can they be if he forgets them everytime he comes back?

amaturewriter:first chp [lovers were godlike beings]
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

it can be easily said that they are his wifes [its even mentioned]....if thats not enough, author comments about it here or I think in chp 2 or 5..the author says it...

RobertBoss:Hmmm....but it doesnt say they're lovers. I mean how can they be if he forgets them everytime he comes back?
Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10Primordial_Phoenix

OMG same I read alot of fanfiction and like 6/10 They'll try to add some super depressing background to make you feel bad for the MC It gets so f****** annoying and they do that just so they can justify the MC being some psychotic bastard or some really wimpy MC

Monke_Wylad:The reason why I didn't continue reading it, because of the summary, I don't understand why writers needs to bring the cringie cliché bad childhood MC, bohoo I need to cry for the MC. 😑
Kash_108
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You summarized my feelings about those fanfics perfectly no one wants a psycho with no morals I read a fanfic where mc literally rapes women multiple times and I’m supposed to like the mc? I’ve also read stories where the mc is a little ***** which gets annoying really fucking fast

Primordial_Phoenix:OMG same I read alot of fanfiction and like 6/10 They'll try to add some super depressing background to make you feel bad for the MC It gets so f****** annoying and they do that just so they can justify the MC being some psychotic bastard or some really wimpy MC
WN_Enthusiast
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Shit. I agree with this very much

JesterTheFool
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Will every tortured protagonist have to be cruel? Isn't it up to him to be cruel or not? All I know is that the tortured MC loses his naivety.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

**: I forgot add...MC is incredibly naïve

JesterTheFool:Will every tortured protagonist have to be cruel? Isn't it up to him to be cruel or not? All I know is that the tortured MC loses his naivety.