Review Detail of Kari_Rakitan in IMPERFECT COUPLE AND THEIR PERFECT LOVE

This is a good start. I like how the characters accept their arranged marriage instead of fighting against it like characters from Western authors do. I also like how the mother-in-law is supportive of her daughter-in-law's dreams. That's beautiful. The chapters are a bit shorter than usual. Words said by the characters, a.k.a. dialogue needs to be enclosed in quotation marks and offset with commas, "Like this," and there are several more errors, but the meaning still comes through clearly.