Review Detail of SergeantCupCake in Kingdom's and Armies

1. The story is good. 2. Character development isn't that bad. 3. Background development is somewhat there. 4. The Main Character personality is interesting. 5. Description of characters in the story is okay. 6. The writing style is not bad, but could be better. 7. The events happening in the story is pretty good. 8. The Story has potential, but needs improvements like rewriting it. 9. The idea of the story is good. 10. Overall, 3.2 Stars.