Review Detail of Condemned in I will never write here ever again

Good points: Your English is top notch and you really have a good grasp with it. I saw no mistakes on the 5 chaps that i have read so far. And if ever there were any, then it's negligible. I can already already 'feel' the time you have spent on writing every chapter as all the first 5 chaps are definitely well-written. Your writing style is similar to a book I have read. The book title is : Surviving the Evacuation So question is, why did this well-written book not receive the amount of views that it deserve? - Firstly, the writing style does not sell well in WN. If you had checked on the rankings, you will see that the top books are stories about cultivation and fantasy romance. I'm not saying that your book is bad, but WN is not the right place. - World Building is somewhat slow for a 'daily life novel' that it makes the average readers of WN who prefers intense genre. - Character Building is developing but not that much. It's like she exists, but there were no hints of potential tragic/unexpected interlude. - The story is developing quite well, but like what i have said, this type of books will be neglected by typical WN readers. Suggestions to increase views: Perhaps add tragedy, magical realism, or some sort of interesting stuffs that will make average WN readers to follow the story more and be loyal to the book.