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Not_a_mango
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The book is overall good. Very good if i may add but the update stability is eating me from inside out. Also spoiler ahead.......... There are some real narcissistic characters. I have seen 2 most obnoxious one. One is a political fiancé and another is his disciple who is a "God-King". The fiancé kind of later gets less obnoxious but still obnoxious. The disciple is getting some development. BUT The most despicable thing in this novel/book is that, THE MC/PROTAGONIST DOESN'T GET ANY FRICKING CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT. I can't express the frustration I have felt with the lack of character development with our character who is the focus of our novel. As much as i like the concept of this novel, if I can't see any character development it will amount to nothing later. Also considering the fact that this is the first novel of our dear author, the writing quality is way beyond i expected. The only 2 lacking thing is the update stability and the lack of character development. Hope Author will take this in a positive way and bring us delight through his arts.

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