well, the story is pretty wholesome, but realistically not really for me lets go through the list the writing is not bad, actually pretty good, however its not very story teller like, it has the kind of 15year old teenage girl vibe and the child like excitement, the story is written more like a blog or diary, but thats mostly a neutral since its more of a preference thing updates are somewhat slow, but its an amature novel and people have real life too the story aint really for me as i said before, its very slice of life like, i went into it with more of a kingdom building novel in mind, so for me its a bit meh characters are alright, both main characters are fairly fleshed out for a 30 chapter story the world is pretty well described not overly detailed, but it gets the job done just fine
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