Review Detail of Loyalscum in Crossing The Divide
Review detail
I like this story It reminds me a bit of my own its just unlike me the author can write out a conversation while I just have everyone grunt and nod. I wonder if you can make the boy fall on to the path of darkness and have him be a demonic cultivator make him also abandon his humanity that would be nice. Then make the old man a bit on the good side like an angle but both of them dont hate each other insted its still a master and student relationship. They will have an unbreakable bond as they break the spines of alwho oppose the. Sorr my evil side came out a bit its a good story though.
Crossing The Divide
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Weirdo:How dare you promote your own novel here!!! Now, there's a new book in my library!!!! With front pic of grumpy old man with Yoda on his shoulder!!!!
No!!!! I will not show my love or hope or whatever "My little Pony" poop out!!! I will slap you with whip!!! I will clamp your balls with mouse trap!!! And your nipple? I'm going to put some earring on it!!!!
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You welcome. I will definitely read it later. And I would definitely leave review.. Don't worry about previous comment, I'm just messing with other readers that challenge me to become tsundere, yandere, or whatever dere he/she want... And I'm losing..
Loyalscum:Thank you for adding my book to your library if you like what you read I hope you show some love and write a review