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Tatiana_Perez
Tatiana_PerezLv134yr
2020-07-03 16:03

Me gusta mucho esta historia la protagonista se volvió fuertes dio a luz esos pequeños bollos, me agrada que ella se encontrara con personas que la ayudarán para bien, espero leer un gran final 😚🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

Music for my Unspoken Words.... Chase me for your Second Chance

summerzpoison
4.5
389 Chs

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Windreader8675
Windreader8675Lv5

First before I start the book is really really good even with a bit of minor flaws. When reading, what you have to take note is that when the characters are speaking, there is no quote punctuations. However, this doesn't affect the story that much. Aside from some punctuation that are missed and some grammars, the plot is really good and easily got you hooked. You can read it while having a cup of tea/coffee/milk or during quiet time. For those who give this a try, you would quickly fall in love with the book. Oh, right. Author-san please don't let the jerk ex-husband be the main ml please? Please let our moon be with the Viscount or the other knights. As a reader, I wanted to let our moon be spoiled forever, that jerk already made her life a living hell before so don't let that bastard be the one who will walk with our moon in the end, okay?

4yr

kalaivani1
kalaivani1Lv11

Good plot... Good story development... Waiting for next chapter... Fast release please... Mass release... Mass release..... Required strong male lead development

5yr
Jessiebae
JessiebaeLv14

Interesting story. FL goes about having her revenge in a really smart way it's quite satisfying. However this story desperately needs an editor. It is not an easy read because the grammar is all over the place and sometimes the dialogue is apart of the descriptions and the are hardly quotation marks. Would be more appealing when this problem gets fixed

4yr
PotatoDreams
PotatoDreamsLv4

So far the story is very interesting, I will continue to read it.. I don't want Louie as male lead 😡.. I just hope it's not him 😕😕 let's see 😑

4yr
Humaira_Jarjisa
Humaira_JarjisaLv4

Love the story and the way it's developing. It's indeed a sweet revenge. Everyone has to pay for their sins one day. Luna suffered alot and deserves the best. The people around luna are strong and I like each and everyone of them. I want louie to suffer for everything that he made luna go through. Without even trying to get to know her, he decided that she's a useless person and treated her like ****. I was so happy when francois proposed and luna accepted the proposal. Please author, it's an earnest request. Please, please make luna and francois end up together. They are so perfect together and they deserve each other. Also litte bunnies love him too.

4yr
BlackRose68
BlackRose68Lv10

I really like this novel. The development of the story is really great. I don't know who luna will end up with but I hope it's not her ex because I really like how luna is taking her sweet revenge and forgot all of her feeling to get every one that have hurt her and I want luna to keep going like that to find a new love. She deserve a new love that will not abuse he. But I also hope author could edit this novel because when I was reading this its hard to tell apart the dialogue between character and it give me a headache. So author please fix it because I really like your work

4yr
mishelle
mishelleLv11

If you can get past the grammar, it is a pretty good read. Personally, I can't continue to read. these chapters need an editor. Good luck Author!

4yr
Nemesis1224
Nemesis1224Lv4

Reveal spoiler

4yr
BLACKJACK7680
BLACKJACK7680Lv12

Keep up the great work author. Only 10 chapters into the story and I already like it!! I just hope that the ML will not be Chen, please have someone else be the ML. But looking at how the story is progressing chen's probably the ML. But I still hope that a twist will happen!!

4yr
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