Review Detail of ILLYAchan in SCEPTIX: THE LEGEND OF MAGIC

Prepare for my long honest review XD (since you wanted it for improvement) The story has five chapters as of writing this review. I'll start with the writing quality. Along with the story, the improvement could be seen and I suggest to edit the first chapter which I think has a lot of grammatical errors. The good side is I imagined the scenes while reading the first and second chapters regardless of the grammatical errors but still edit it for greater impact. That's all for the writing quality since it's a given that the author is doing her best. Then the story development, it's going well and interesting. Personally, I like fantasy so I enjoyed reading. That's all since there are only a few chapters and it's too early to say what would happen as it's a new novel. Next is character design. I noticed that the main character, zen that she regained memories easily. The thing is a doctor or someone professional wouldn't risk a person's mental health to regain her memories that fast since it'll overload inside her head. (Info. Overload, something like that) especially if it's someone important although just disregard this if they have a super-advanced technology that prevents a person from experiencing side effects. For other characters, they're well-designed by the author and nothing much to say. (Since its too long to explain, but it's all good char. designs XD) Still small details and hints about the world background but looking forward to how the system works in your story's world. About the stability of updates, I personally didn't criticize this part since I believe that updates shouldn't be rushed so I always give 5 stars here. Overall, a nice story to look forward too. Goodluck, Author!