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the_other_juan
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Shatter: The System

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OrdealOfMc
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While I appreciate the 5-star rating, I wouldnt encourage to continue this practise, as it gives me stomach-ache when I see any reviewer giving 5-stars for no apparent reason, even when the story is bad. Would appreciate any suggestions to the story.

the_other_juan
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Sorry im not really confident with my english so i decided not to write anything, Anyway i loved your story, your grammar is good and i loved what you did with the MC, other fics MC's personality changes when they recieve a system or powerup getting consumed by there ego or something,