Review Detail of OrdealOfMc in Shatter: The System

The shameless author here with his 5-star rating. Just wanted to make a place where readers could say what they want from the story and where I could comfortably get notifications and reply. Now, about the story. First I must say that I'm writing this just for fun when I'm fed up with stories that have unmatchable plot holes. Second, I'm planning this story as I write it, meaning there will, without a doubt, be some parts that I'm unhappy about but too lazy to fix. Third, I have a fragile ego, so please don't incinerate it. Constructive criticism is welcomed thought, and offers on how to improve the story, what powers to get, what treasures not to miss is welcomed also. Finally, I'm asking you to not be an asshole and write "bad story" X100 due to one thing that didn't go in the story as you wanted(I'm looking at you, thirsty-chan) P.s I haven't watched One Piece, Bleach, Danmachi, and didn't read AST and forgot everything about MGA, so is you want any powers from them, please describe them ;)