Review Detail of Next_Person in The Awakening Unknown: Journal of the Lost Soul

Item: The Awakening Unknown: Journal of the Lost Soul
Rating: 3.4

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Next_PersonLv14yrNext_Person

IT4903, you should slow down the pacing and write with full emotion. You have some decent chapter enders and cliff hangers. Also focus more on expressing your characters

The Awakening Unknown: Journal of the Lost Soul

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Thank you for the feedback will do.

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