I like the way the author writes and describe... it's quite intriguing and mysterious. Some proofreading is required. I suggest using Grammarly or other online apps to rule out basic problems.
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LIKEThank You for your comment. I appreciate reader feedback. Were you targeting this comment towards me ( the author) or was this comment directed towards the reviewer?
Clwxui:Could you put a more detailed synopsis? Why this synopsis did not encourage me to read no.