Review Detail of Cyan_Star in Child of Destiny

When I saw this novel for the first time I thought, 'this will be an interesting read', and is was, but the English was so terrible that I had to drop the story. This book has many typos, the author has no idea of the concept of past tense, or grammar in general. I had to correct every sentence in my mind just to make this novel a readable one.... Although I haven't read much, this book could have been an excellent one, a shame the author doesn't know how to write.