Review Detail of Shwasindro in Dissolve

Writing style is good, have potential. Your pronoun is a bit confusing. Like 'his' instead of 'her' and vice-versa. Please do not change Itachi's character ( no harem for Itachi, girls chasing after him is ok but not the other way around) many people ruined Itachi's character and also ruined their fanfiction. Only 4 stars until further chapters.