Review Detail of Ex4l in The Light that shall shine upon the Star Wars Galaxy

Wish fullfilment, there is more system and gatcha than true story in each chapters. MC ask for a system that is not too easy but can summon DK 1min after receiving His system, he can store capital ship in is inventory or even a full deathstar. So, there is work to do to make that one readable. And the author as the guts to allready ask for money...