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A surprisingly good fanfic with a good amount of worldbuilding in between, tough it is a pity that the characters don't seem to have a reason to appear. People do have their own quirks, but it feels superficial, like it wouldn't be strange if they suddenly forgot their own names in the next chapter. The current state kind of reminds me of RWBY's first Volumes, frankly *******ish but actually promising. I would recommend the author reading "The Spider Of Remnant" on Whattpad in order to get a feel for my hopes. In short, description is good, characters could be better. The System is actually the one who seems be better developed here. P.S.: Don't know if I should rate negative stars since there's no Bethesda glitch in sight? Where are the randomly flying corpses, fence climbing cows, Piper's tanned skin, etc? I demand content!

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