Review Detail of amaturewriter in RING OF FATE

This is STUPID..........let me explain....the writer has clearly planed out everything, something that not many writers do....so credit where credit is due thats dope...the grammer story and structure is all decent ....the plot..basically an avg MC disliked or hated by everyone who then suddenly gains a Gold finger and becomes amazing.....the MC is OP so thats dope........now why its ****.....the relationships.....MC gains every love interests attention only after he becomes amazing....before they either ignored or just hated/didnt like him.......basically the character development [ CD ]is non existent and cliche............MC becomes " stronger "...the more he gains fame and as a result of both he gains the lovers attention...point is =.......its shallow......the lovers and the MC....... Not a bash....kudos to writer...but personally this is ****ty and cliche....would be better if MC had a lover/lovers that liked him before....rather than after his transformation... **...reading status is not 21......................ignore that ****,,,,,,I just went back t read the boxing match to see whether it was shallow [the CD] and it was ........