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swaran
swaranLv55yr
2020-01-12 19:29

The hell wrong with you author, do you have a NTR fetish and what the hell kind if punishment was that, the MC should just leave her, making it turn that she lost her memories is a valid reason for cheating is stupid and even worse you're bringing them back together like nothing really happened and you want diana to be with steve rogers after she NTR MC, might as well let her fall for him and then make it that some god ther turn peggy to her youth so steve ditch diana and go back to her, that will good enough punishment for her and for felicia just dump her.......... currently you are ruining the story yourself

Soldier Zero

Deathseeker
3.2
78 Chs

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Imagination_GodR18
Imagination_GodR18Lv1

I mean its not that bad its better than having shrex with a guy right? If its a guy i will kill them both but if its a girl its okay because they just shared pussy juices not semen poured in to her

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FBI_B1TCH
FBI_B1TCHLv14

Just a warning to any future readers; it's got pretty bad NTR. If you can ignore the NTR and the shaky grammar (especially the dialogue), you've got yourself a pretty good read. Author I suggest you don't put back and forth dialogue in a single paragraph and you need to work on portraying emotions too. All the dialogue just seems super flat. Unfortunately my heart is too weak for this NTR so I'm out but good luck.

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Mortifer
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NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!!NTR ALERT!!!! NTR ALERT!!!! MC'S GIRLFRIEND GOES AROUND SCREWING OTHER PEOPLE!!

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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10

New rating after the first one. The author doesn’t listen to his readers and let’s the MC get NTR lol and then out of nowhere instead of him beating the sh*t/killing the person who cheated on him without Felicia but OUT OF NOWHERE says that she is “brainwashed” or “lost her memories” so if you like your MC to get NTRed then by all means read this novel from an author that doesn’t listen to his readers lol it’s pathetic

5yr
tommy_king
tommy_kingLv14

NTR. at least warn people that there is going to be ntr later in the story and then you try and save your her ass by saying her memory’s are sealed, nah fam, I’m good. *proceeds to kill her*.

5yr
Daoist198784
Daoist198784Lv4

this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR this is NTR

5yr
PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

NTR ------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Lumiereiii
LumiereiiiLv5

ALERTA NTR !!!! ALERTA NTR !!!! ALERTA NTR !!!! ALERTA NTR !!!! ALERTA NTR !!!! ALERTA NTR !!!! ALERTA NTR !!!! ALERTA NTR !!!! ALERTA NTR !!!! A AMIGA DO MC VAI CORTAR OUTRAS PESSOAS !!

5yr
Kaiser0000
Kaiser0000Lv6

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Heylin
HeylinLv14

All in all not really outstanding but nontheless a good read. I like the world building and Shura adds a lot of different types of Gods and cultures. His love interest tho is one of the parts in the story im not too sure i like. Well first she is a Damsel in distress that needs to be rescued. She got 'abducted' or thrown? not sure wich word is more fitting into the DC verse and the first thing she does is cheat on the MC with Wonder Woman. She did state that she was Bi, but still. Her cheating on him so quickly does leave a bad taste in my mouth and i hope hes not just gonna ignore it or even support it. NTR is always a bad sign in a relationship and i dont think many people could live with it.

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BEASTMASTER9999999
BEASTMASTER9999999Lv2

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