Review Detail of Nate_hunter in Astral Sutra

Ima be honest, 22 chapters into the story, we have spent more time directing our vision at the breast of a young teen then actually training. the villains make zero sense, someone looks at them wrong and suddenly there is a death feud? there are new characters brought in every 5 chapters and are treated like we have known them since the start, but zero clue who they are. AND EVERY FUCKING POWER THE MC GETS IS GOTTEN OFF SCREEN. sorry, had to get that one off my chest, he randomly got sucked into a dimension early in the story got hit with a fireball then we were told he got a tablet from the fireball only 4 chapter later without seeing it during the scene. on the last chapter before the lock he had a power called Astral vision but we were not told when or how he got, only that it's op and it's plot armor. TLDR storry is nonsense, villains are nonsense, writing is nonsense, author is nonsense.