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KageMugen
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2020-06-07 17:33

After 5 chapters I don't see any issues this not becoming a good webnovel except maybe the speed at which you write. 6 chapters per month is a bit low. Grammar except some minor typos is good. The story flows nicely so far... Speed up or it will only last me a day to read the whole thing. Regards to the author.

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