Review Detail of MintyMintyMilkTea in Deleted Deleted Novel (2)

Cool prologue and interesting start. The dialogue is fun and helps flesh out the characters. I haven't read many novels that intentionally switch between third person and third person, which is interesting. It feels like the author has fleshed out a lot of the story so I'm interested to read more! The grammar is a little rough. There's some switches between past tense and present tense, but overall it is easily readable. Looking forward to reading more chapters!