Are you trying to make a sentence with the Chapter Headings? That'd be cool. Didn't think of that... The character is likeable, seems a bit confused on the idea of being in another world and at the same time not the game world he assumed he was going to be saving. The female character seems cute. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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