Absolutely terrible grammar. Regardless of how good your ideas may be I cannot read this trash. I recommend you hire an editor for your work. Machine translated novels are easier to read than your work. This is the novel's standard. So fellow readers who can read this novel you have my praise. I tried reading all of the first few chapters but I could not handle the bad grammar. If you cannot read it everything get's one star.
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