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Bone_Crusher99
Bone_Crusher99Lv24yr
2020-05-30 13:53

I really liked this novel in beginning, it started out pretty good but later author just fu**ed it up. Bull**** reasons to keep mc strength hidden even at situations where he should be domineering. Then he keep introducing too many harem members without giving any screentime to best waifus introduced in beginning, he just keep increasing them without any making balance among them. But the only reason why I still keep reading was that MC was too OP but again then author pulled out extreme forced and bull**** situation to restrict mc power. My opinion read only 15 to 20 chapter and if you don't like it then stop reading because it'll only get worse. P.S This is my first time writing a review. I'd never thought that my first review would be so harsh.

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Beziik
BeziikLv14

It's stated by the MC (so author) itself in the first couple of chapters about how he'll act in this reincarnation, it was clearly said that for him this is just a kind of theatre play with precise script. So he doesn't need "bullsh1t reasons", all the reasons were stated at the start of the story ( repeated various times for dull mfs out there that decided to ignore this point anyway) and were incorporated in the mentality of the mc that's supposed to be quite ancient to say the least. now this is a mini spoiler but he did find something interesting meant to change his way of living and decided to change his mentality afterwards, do you know they call this character development in decent webnovels

Bone_Crusher99
Bone_Crusher99Lv2

I get it what you are saying. It's alright when the important characters are annoying but here even small fries were getting on my nerves and MC just takes the insult without doing anything. And even if he tries to take action, he gets stopped by someone else. At first it was alright but it was repeated many times and got so much annoying. So, what if MC has little character devolpment after hundreds of chs, the other side characters still doesn't have much devolpment and with so large harem, they have little screen time.

Beziik:It's stated by the MC (so author) itself in the first couple of chapters about how he'll act in this reincarnation, it was clearly said that for him this is just a kind of theatre play with precise script. So he doesn't need "bullsh1t reasons", all the reasons were stated at the start of the story ( repeated various times for dull mfs out there that decided to ignore this point anyway) and were incorporated in the mentality of the mc that's supposed to be quite ancient to say the least. now this is a mini spoiler but he did find something interesting meant to change his way of living and decided to change his mentality afterwards, do you know they call this character development in decent webnovels
CannotSayNo
CannotSayNoLv14

Screen time of harem members is indeed weak (though at least author doesn't forget about any woman). As for the insult part look from the perspective of MC - he never cares for it, for him it's like child's whining. Not to mention that he treats this as his entertainment and later still faceslaps the opponent (especially if insult was thrown at waifu). It would be boring if he owned everyone in seconds (even people close to him would be afraid of him after some time).

Bone_Crusher99:I get it what you are saying. It's alright when the important characters are annoying but here even small fries were getting on my nerves and MC just takes the insult without doing anything. And even if he tries to take action, he gets stopped by someone else. At first it was alright but it was repeated many times and got so much annoying. So, what if MC has little character devolpment after hundreds of chs, the other side characters still doesn't have much devolpment and with so large harem, they have little screen time.
StarShifter
StarShifterLv4

So the harem is the pokemon type harem,where mc is collecting every women introduced ?If so can someone introduce a novel where the harem is limited and there is proper interaction between the characters ?

CannotSayNo:Screen time of harem members is indeed weak (though at least author doesn't forget about any woman). As for the insult part look from the perspective of MC - he never cares for it, for him it's like child's whining. Not to mention that he treats this as his entertainment and later still faceslaps the opponent (especially if insult was thrown at waifu). It would be boring if he owned everyone in seconds (even people close to him would be afraid of him after some time).
CannotSayNo
CannotSayNoLv14

I wouldn't say it's exactly pokemon-type harem because only few harem members have less interaction with MC because they are not relevant to the story. Searching for a harem story with such interactive relationships between MC and harem members is pretty hard because a lof of such novels have a shitty uptake on love/relationship. Personally I would say the relationships in this novel is still a little better than average/it's on average level.

StarShifter:So the harem is the pokemon type harem,where mc is collecting every women introduced ?If so can someone introduce a novel where the harem is limited and there is proper interaction between the characters ?
StarShifter
StarShifterLv4

I read some novel like “rupigea” “illicit relationship “ “spirit cultivation “ those had some good harem interactions .Not like some novels Where almost all character just disappears after some times

CannotSayNo:I wouldn't say it's exactly pokemon-type harem because only few harem members have less interaction with MC because they are not relevant to the story. Searching for a harem story with such interactive relationships between MC and harem members is pretty hard because a lof of such novels have a shitty uptake on love/relationship. Personally I would say the relationships in this novel is still a little better than average/it's on average level.
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

Nah, I Think you are really wrong. Because if this was just a theatre-play for him he wouldn't get angry at all the other people but just be calm or smirking at every Person Who tries to insult him , but he, in fact, gets angry like every other normal Teenager .

Beziik:It's stated by the MC (so author) itself in the first couple of chapters about how he'll act in this reincarnation, it was clearly said that for him this is just a kind of theatre play with precise script. So he doesn't need "bullsh1t reasons", all the reasons were stated at the start of the story ( repeated various times for dull mfs out there that decided to ignore this point anyway) and were incorporated in the mentality of the mc that's supposed to be quite ancient to say the least. now this is a mini spoiler but he did find something interesting meant to change his way of living and decided to change his mentality afterwards, do you know they call this character development in decent webnovels
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LuciTitangenl
LuciTitangenlLv5

Lame This is stupid in many ways. Petty I say. He should have died from the first chapter. For such a spineless bastard. Even if they made a stupid fucking mistake to him it was started because of his incompetent father. He should have taken all his pettynes on him. Show results and represent an invisible profit and benefits to the (Kingdom. But no he just have to be a Man-child. Taking unrealistic girls left and right. Fucking rapist. This is why abortion is legal. He does not take action and control to make a better world nor destroy it. Instead he just keep fucking around. Another parasite to be cleansed. Lower than the enemies he faced. He took offense of such a childly ploy and instead of playing it off and be the bigger man, he fucking... DAMN YOU AUTHOR. YOU ARE A CORROUSIVE CUM STAIN. He is an immortal and the most powerful in this current "World". Proclaiming to be an Experienced Mother Fucker who has reincarnated for over seven hundered times (that is two times three hundred fifty Motha Facka). Experience being all archetypes. But still have an intellegence lesser than of an Ant. I hope those over seven hundred worlds are okay. For an Immortal, he is a disgrace. A Pretentious Cunt. Having thoughts that he have done anything and to come up with such a childish ploy, WHAT A JOKE! HIM being called a Bastard not because of him being born of an affair but him being such a dickhead, is a great name for him for he is such a Dick Waffle. Really, why have you taken this route.

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