Review Detail of A_Canadian in Brightest Doom
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Author-tofu, I feel that you write in ecchi stuff to give the illusion of story development. It is a good story but it gets boring when waiting for all the fun stuff to happen. aside from the off-kilter pacing this is a good novel with fewer-than-most grammar mistakes. Updates are monthly. Lol
Brightest Doom
BigToFu
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A_CanadianLv11A_Canadian
Pretty harsh review, sorry but I do feel funny with the pacing. The characters are fun~ no complaints there. And the events that do happen are in stark contrast to all the s*x mumbo jumbo filler-ish stuff.(makes you want more cool stuff) Batman Vs Doom seems like an epic final confrontation, Please reach that point!