Review Detail of Tonyorobsky in Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in SAO?

I have 2 problems with this fanfic. 1-The protagonist’s narcissism is annoying. Some people like exagerrated flaws or quirks, then it’s good for you. 2-The guy chose to go to SAO world, a world with no magic, no supernatural. And the first job he choose is beginner mage. It would have been better to get Beginner Esper (telekinesy > electrokinesis, empathy > telepathy), much more compatible with a technological world.