Good plot, unfortunately, there are minor grammar and spelling errors. The author able to carry out a good story line that could catch someone's attention. I am reading Tagalog novel recently to improve my Tagalog knowledge. Recommended this one, though, character point of view is not my cup of tea yet this one is an exception! Keep it up!
Mixxy_18
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LIKEI'm sorry for the bad grammars and errors. I'm just a mare newbie here and I'm actually still learning. But I'm glad that you still like my story even though it is not perfect. This makes me motivated more to write and work it out. And I'll surely do my best to give you all a satisfactory chapters until I'll finish this. Keep safe and God bless you all đđ