Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in The Primordial’s Ascension

So typical of a feudal society, to fight relatives with each other. The peaceful and happy days of a good ruler are replaced by some kind of freak ... and a sea of ​​blood then pours. Nr all the rulers do not care! Great written! Unexpectedly. That the main character has become a beast, or rather even a bird, is amusing. Definitely intriguing! It would be interesting to see how a bird holds a sword in his hands and fights with a wolf, this would be an epic battle! Is a bird flying to the city? This is something unusual, unusual, incomprehensible ... but is this a magical world, anything can be ?! The fang on the bird’s face? What does it look like? This is not a joke, I do not quite understand the downtime. I regret that my English is not so good if I misunderstood. Does a swan fly, but not using wings, but using a sword? It certainly should look very funny! Chapter 12 is cool! A bird having passed the circle of reincarnation can be turned into a person? This is strong! Definitely your book deserves to be added to my library. Interestingly write, easily already read 19 chapters. And it happens that you read 2-3 and then you write a comment. Well done! Bravo! Seachs reading chapter 20, addictive! Alas, as a school or academy appears in the novel, there is always a place for intrigue, conspiracy, secret societies ... Billion years ... it sounds too cool ... and requires the owner of this knowledge of wisdom and does not allow him to make simple and complex mistakes. Otherwise, a billion years, wasted ... 4 chapters a day ?! Well, you are a cool author !!!! Yes, without proofreading loading raw materials, a lot of errors pop up. Thanks to the author for his hard work! Interestingly the 3 remaining elder disciples were humans or magic beasts? It's good that the tournament is not prolonged, thanks to the author! Search the Internet for Chinese names, they are, or ask for help in the forum. Well, a cliché also appeared, but I said that school and tournaments always lead to such ends ... and avoiding the basis of the storyline ... but of course there are more chapters ... enemies, intrigues, murder, on this basis betrayal, treason ... enemies ... everything is corny and boring. A little offtopic - when they start to write a novel about alchemists, the beginning and the middle about alchemy and then there is crap about cultivation and not a word about alchemy, also in relation to medicine ... intrigue and murder and not a word about medicine ... in cooking tops ... maybe you should write right away, your novels are not about alchemy, not medicine, not fishing, not treasures, not warehouses but about banal cultivation ... a good novel was about apocolypsis, but then the author suffered 5D ... during a universe about giants and he tritely leaked the end of his novel, making it a masterpiece in unions loe shit. I really hope that our author will be able to avoid this, will be able to continue to write an original story, to develop his amazing story. Updating 4 chapters a day is cool and commendable. I read 33 chapters in one go. It is read very fascinatingly. I recommend to all lovers of cultivation and DAO. The author is a connoisseur of this! 5 stars, but I would give 10. Cons - there are minor semantic errors, but they can be forgiven to the author, since he was in a hurry with the update. Thank!!!! I included the book in my library and if it will be possible to give a couple of stones for promotion. Good luck to the author. There is a wish - the author write but do not overwork, it is better to write 4-5 chapters a week but on an ongoing basis than 4 chapters a day and then do not write for 1 month. The author of every success in his work and thank you very much for such a wonderful novel, bravo !!!