Item: Another War
Rating: 3.6
Author: kazesenken

kazesenkenLv35yr

2019-11-11 00:01

As far as I have read so far, this novel appears to be the story of a boy being transported into a magical, apocalyptic world that has been ravaged by monsters. As the boy gets saved by a girl monster slayer, he himself gains a similar power to fight them off. Seeing this, he joins her in an academy of sorts that trains slayer. It's not the most creative of plots, which makes it a bit difficult to latch onto. As I was reading, I felt that there was just something missing, a unique gimmick, a hook persay, that would draw in the reader to click the 'Add to Library' button. I'm not saying at all that the plot is uninteresting, in which I do see potential. But there seems to be a lack of something eyecatching, the moment that makes you think, I want to read more. With the large variety of novels that use similar tropes, the author should think carefully how to distinguish itself from others. Some people may disagree with me on this, but I personally did not see that moment. The writing itself is decent, but I would be careful with your sentence flow, which tends to repeat and be simplistic. One example is how you often start sentences with, "MC does this or he sees that." Vary the flow a bit.

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