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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv44yr
2020-11-30 11:56

In the first dozen of chapters we are introduce to the MC's fox friend. After a cool fight, we are once again are put through the torture of reading the MC losing his powers for the fourth time in the story, but now we have to deal with his apparent lack of memories on top of it. This is completely ridiculous for the author to think that this was a good idea to start the second part of his book. And don't forget guys, this fic takes place right after the MC goes to the Fairy World right when he REGAINED his powers for the THIRD TIME. I really don't know if I should even attempt reading this any longer. This author clearly grew to big for his own good and created a disaster of a story so far. As of now the first translator has done a horrible job with the translation. By giving characters names like White Jade and Daoist This and That. It is clearly obvious this work is derived from google translate with little time put into fixing the grammar and sentence structures. Overall I'll wait till a good 200 chapters are translated. So I can skip a head where we have a MC who is back to his previous strength. Right now this fic is a solid 2/5 for everything being subpar. I'll update this with in the next five years.

A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality—Immortal World Arc

Wang Yu
4.4
60 Chs

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AllSage
AllSageLv2

Some warnings for those who want to start reading this novel. This novel is a direct continuation of the previous work with the same name. So talking directly about the aspects of this novel is a spoiler of the previous work. I will talk about the previous work. This is a very different novel from wuxia standards: The protagonist is weak and his advantage (cheat) only serves as support and does not bring much difference in his power. There are no clichés like face slap, arrogant young master, powerful master who knows everything, or powerful women falling in love with the protagonist. This is a story about a mortal who luckily has the opportunity to walk towards immortality. So the protagonist is average. He is a Jack of all trades, knows and use many things,but is not an expert on anything. This is one of the only novels I read that mine gave me the feeling of an average cultivator who manages to prevail through schemes, struggles and luck, cultivating higher and higher. It's not like the universe is helping him or some treasure or absurd solution falls from the sky to help the protagonist. So I highly recommend it.

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Manshaur_Rahman_2929
Manshaur_Rahman_2929Lv1

Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60??? Why did it stop at chapter 60???

3yr
LusTY
LusTYLv4

So Book 1 is completed ....... When will new chapters be updated(in this)..????(all fans are waiting). When when when when when when when when when when when .....update update

3yr
wahaj_kay
wahaj_kayLv1

Shame Shame Web-novel. Give the license to Wuxia if you cant handle translating it. Shame on youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!

3yr
Sgeorge_Sstoica
Sgeorge_SstoicaLv1

Shame on you, webnovel, picking web novels to translate and dropping them, so others wouldn't be able to translate them now that they are already taken.

3yr
fengxueer
fengxueerLv10

anyway we can get an actual translation? This excuse of an MTL edited translation is a disgrace to a novel of this calibre, can u pls not ruin stuff webnovel??

3yr
Erwan_Amir
Erwan_AmirLv1

When this story gonna have new update? It's been like a year has passed since the last chapter been published. Story is good. But it does have a prequel. This is a sequel. It seems it started off with a bang and grew from there...

3yr
hiskiafrans
hiskiafransLv13

Hope this get translated. The pre-quel is the best novel i've ever read. In previous book, I love all about how to build the MC. How slow pace the MC is build. So I realy want to see how the development character for Han Li in this book.

4yr
Ryurial
RyurialLv6

damn a continuation huh... i ddnt even finish the first one yet but the more chapters this one has...the better. stack them up, stack them up.

5yr
Ineedaname
IneedanameLv6

First EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP Read the raws, annoying at the start if you read the rest of RMJI. EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP

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