Review Detail of Tom_Sky in The Dark Star Emperors

I read 23 chapters. It's a strange but fascinating story. I don't like to read novice authors in serious fantasy style. I'm writing a simple story about a simple Potter who just acts in a new version of the world. It's not a simple story. It's an attractive story of innovation and adventure. I like the author's cautious style. The author is careful and attentive to the details of the world. The characters reveal themselves well. The plot isn't tired yet. I don't have enough humor.