Review Detail of timberlord in What do you mean my cute disciples are Yanderes?

Hi, author here. Just some info for anyone who is interested in picking up this story but is wary because of this review. Only the first female lead has a history of rape which was mentioned in passing and not a big part of the story. It is still important as it becomes something that would build her character later on in the story. As of now, no other female leads have a history of rape. I have no idea what this guy was high on to pull 'gangbang', 'cumdumpstered', 'w'hores' and 'public toilets' from since it's not even remotely in the story. He seems to have only read to chapter 4 which has only introduced 1 female lead so far and he assumes from there that the future 'female leads are all public toilets'. There is absolutely no NTR in the story and there won't ever be. I can only assume this person here has something really personal against the rape topic which is what led him to this. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Nice attempt Mr. Teacher, but your character was implied to 'entertain' various people, your words, and considering how she was raped and was a female, I really dont fucking think it was anything other than being gangbanged by a bunch of people. Dont introduce such a character if you dont even know what you are writing about. You are a disgrace. Dont even attempt to hide it too, literally your wordings and innuendos in the story itself leads to her being a literal whore and a 'relief' girl until she escaped.

I'm just saying, just saying. You implied ALL my female leads were raped which is obviously not true. That's the thing that I'm pointing out. I never denied she was raped and was forced by the syndicates to entertain the underground world. But she's not a 'whore' if it was against her will is it? She's not working as a prostitute after all. And did you know, a female has other ways of entertaining men? Japanese Geishas were known to entertain through performances and they mostly do not engage in sexual activity. You should get your mind out of the gutter if everything automatically equates to sex for you. Sure it might have been implied with the 'entertain' but I never confirmed it. For all you know, she might have been forced to play monopoly with them. And I do know what I'm writing about. That's why I wrote it didn't I? I never downplayed her suffering and anyone who came from such a background obviously won't have a normal view of the world compared to everyone else who didn't. It just seems to me you're just upset ONE of the female leads was not a complete virgin who is completely naive about sex so that she can fulfill your own fantasies on what should be in a story or not. Judging by how you've been dissing on other authors' works, you probably just want the attention or you just want a story that caters to your every fantasy. Sorry kid, that won't happen. Everyone has different tastes so I suggest you at least go write a novel of your own before you continue embarrassing yourself by pissing on other people's works.

Errrr.. i think you miss the point of this story tho.. Your review said that it was like that this story is focusing on rape, gangbang, ect.. in reality it isnt.. It is her background story.. which will shape her character.. And if you this kind of female character is disgusting then.. How do you feel about revy from black lagoon? How do you feel about sakura from fate? How do you feel about noriko from dungeon seeker? They all have similiar background story.. And most of them is like able character.. ( except the last one.. i still think she is stupid.. 😂🤣 ) because their story is not about how they getting raped or what not.. But i think sakura from fate have a lot of fans.. Even with her background story.. I think haruhime from danmachi can be consider have similiar background story.. even tho she still virgin? Maybe.. from my knwoledge i think haruhime is still virgin.. 😅😅 But well.. i suggest you to read this story ahead.. the author only mention and not explain in great detail how she being raped or gangbanged.. Just focus on the comedy side.. The missunderstanding part.. thats funny.. Well.. if you still dont like it.. Then thats it.. hope you can find a novel that you like then.. This novel is not for you.. 😁😁😁 For any other new reader.. go ahead read the first 10 chapter before you decided to drop or not.. 😁😁😁

Just why bother If you dont want to read then dont read You dont have to react that big and affecr other reader I dont want to mind other business, but i just dont approve your opinion about gangbang and rape. First there are so many novel out there that has raped or r18 scene yet never seen someone like you react so personal Dude just read and no badmouth Respect author ideals as he can write whatevee he wanted and never force someone to read his work It would be fine if you are paying and say something like this and that but nahhh You simply reading it for free yet you have guts to complain even trying to rate it low Just who the heck you think you are to judge someone's work

Ok boomer

I am a reader and I have the right to judge. Who the **** are YOU to tell me I cant judge a story on a public website? Dumbass

I know Sakura lmao, she is retarded. Sorry but I dont sympathize with pity sex. She literally just allowed the guy to keep raping her cause she felt guilty lmao. The guy isnt even strong, heck her physical strength is probably stronger from doing archery. He is the epitome of incel and weakling but Sakura just pitied him and let him rape her lol. Funny af how rape in novels and fantasy settings work

Nice irony buddy, you just said it right. I 'never said' it outright, means you implied it. Which means she did 'entertain' lmao. What do you expect a lowly ***** like her to do entertain others, sing for them? She was like a relief girl, someone who is literally a public toilet, the **** else she gonna do to entertain? those low lives who raped her would even feel disgusted by having her entertain them normally, literaly no one would let someone so dead inside and outside serve them. Someone like her serves no purpose other than having her tragic backstory. Its literally a plotdevice that she aint pregnant with some *****'s spawn. Why the **** would anyone want someone like that as their disciple or wife? She probably has every imaginable STDs, if that is even a thing there. I dont even wanna imagine someone like that among the other FLs, thats just outright disgusting.

Because you judged the story without reading through the contents and incorrectly assumed the things implied within said story. Thus, people are calling you out on your unfair and irrational judgement. Blue_Sovereign22 is also a fellow reader expressing their right to judge your comments on a public website like you are. Remember to clear out your trash from your troll cave, kid. It's starting to smell.

I dunno, pretty sure playing chess with them is entertainment enough. Those underworld bosses probably have a power fetish over winning chess against people who don't know how to play chess. Ever thought of that? And what's wrong with taking in someone with such a backstory as their disciple or wife? Just because you abhor it doesn't mean no one else is ok with it. Try to keep an open mind kid, there's more than 7 billion people in the world with 7 billion different mindsets. You're narrowing your horizons and future with such a close-minded thinking.

You know what, I think you're just looking for someone to argue with. Like those stereotypical Karens who try to return store-bought items without a receipt just so they can get a kick out of an argument and get off on the power play. I don't mind having an intellectual banter, really, I don't. Even better if they offer constructive criticisms so I can improve my writing. But your arguments are full of holes and don't really make sense with your case. You can literally go back to your first comment and see you said, word for word, that ALL the female leads got raped when they didn't. I'd just like to say you've been quite an entertainment but know when to count your losses kid, you never stood a chance from the start. Go write a book, maybe I'll take you seriously after you do. Haha.

Troll cave? Nice one incel. Retards like you who write some fanfic of a fanfic and talk **** are the most fun. Dude you couldnt even come up with your original **** and waste time writing some ****ty ass story trying to 'educate' retards on what rape does to you. You are probably a kid who has too much time on your hands or someone who did nothing in life trying to do sth. It aint working out kid. You inserted some stupid plot devices in your story that was totally unnecessary, not even knowing what the readers on this site like and dont like. I saw your stupid ass trying to justify and fool some readers on your chapter's comment section, explaining how its not an NTR and how she was not a virgin bla bla. Nigga she a whore. She has 100 STDs. What the fok you trynna explain? No one will touch her with a 100 foot pole and only someone unrealistic and idiotic like your MC will. I bet he will get infected the moment he even touches her. Dont trynna soft play what she is. Someone who has 100 STDs can only be explained with one word. Whore. In theory she HAD to fuk to survive, which is technically selling her body for something.

Write a book, you dog****? You consider this a BOOK??? Look what this site does to you lmao, having these retards think they are actual authors. You are disgracing the name author, incel. You didnt come up with anything you dog****. You just took what was basically written, and changed some things and posted it. How about YOU write your own book, and publish it, and then talk big, huh kid? And you are one of those retards who think someone has to write a book to judge lmao. Nigga I have read more books than the amount of sperm your mother has swallowed. I have read through all the ****ty fanfics these dogs calling themselves authors have written on this Chinese ass website. You are not at the level of calling out readers buddy, you need an actual story and a book to call yourself an author. Until then, you are just a failed author. Your so called story isnt even an original fanfic, with stories and plots and schemes you have devised yourself. No, you are just a rat who is eating what essentially was someone else's work. If YOU are an author, all the fuking people who posted on all the fanfic sites are authors then. Lmao, funny aint ya? Is this considered authorship now? Wbere are you on goodreads buddy? How long have you been writing? Where are you PREVIOUS WORKS??? Sit down kid, you are nothing

Nice, more content, let's see here. "Dude you couldnt even come up with your original **** and waste time writing some ****ty ass story" I admit to writing this story because I was inspired by feeling_tired's story and felt it was a waste that it stopped there. What's wrong with that? I'm not copy pasting his story, I'm writing my own plot and characters with their own unique backgrounds. You seem to be very against fanfiction and I resent that. A lot of famous stories are basically fanfiction. Paradise Lost by John Milton is basically a fanfiction of the bible. Dante's Inferno and Divine Comedy are also fanfiction. Fifty Shades of Grey started out as a Twilight fanfic too. Heck, most of Shakespeare's works were inspired from something or another. You got something against those? "trying to 'educate' retards on what rape does to you" No, I'm not. Really, I'm not. There's nothing I'm teaching within the story itself. It's YOU who I'm trying to educate through the comments section since you lack the required knowledge to even know what was going on. But nothing inside the story is me trying to teach people about rape. Maybe you should read the other 16 chapters before you embarrass yourself like so. "You inserted some stupid plot devices in your story that was totally unnecessary, not even knowing what the readers on this site like and dont like." It's not a stupid plot device if it is necessary for her character development. How would you know what's necessary or not if you literally don't know what I have planned for the future? And it's not I don't know what the readers on this site like and don't like, it's just you who I don't know nor really care about what you like or don't like. "Nigga she a whore." A whore in the Cambridge dictionary means Prostitute. A Prostitute in the Cambridge dictionary means a person who has sex with someone for money. She did not have sex with anyone for money, therefore she is not a whore. "She has 100 STDs" How would you know? You the one with the 100 STDs who raped her? I dust my hands, your turn, little troll. This is quite fun.

Right yeah, read my other reply about fanfics. I guess there aren't a lot of authors out there if that's the case. And I have been writing for about 5 years already and this is just my first story on Webnovel. I'm already being contracted for my works and I don't think you'll appreciate them with how you've been acting. Scratch that, I doubt you have the intelligence to actually. So yeah, I told you, you never stood a chance from the start, kid.

A 'lot' of fanfics, lmao sure. I am not even against fanfiction buddy, what I said was you haven earned the word author yet. Atleast publish your ****, have your name on Goodreads, otherwise you cant call out others on not being an author lmao. You, yourself isnt an author yet my dude, I am sure the ones you mentioned have published their books, and are accepted as authors. You are not. You just skipped why I said she is a whore, she literally ****ed others for a 'living', in a 'literal' sense. That's a fucking whore. How would I know about STDs? Especially in a setting with no medical system, and no healthcare, and especially when they are at the literal bottom of society, they are bound to have STDs buddy, or does your brain not work to figure that out? Dude, people at the bottom rug of an ancient society didnt even live until their 40s, wonder why? Lmao. Its called a bunch illnesses and health defects, and STDs were probably in the majority if you are even remotely capable of logical thinking. Dont even try to refute this, you cant. Dust my hands lmao, you literally didnt do ****. Goodluck incel. Or you gonna deny that someone raped by a bunch of low life, bottom of society ruffians is not gonna have STD? You think they are wearing condoms? XD, you funny, you real funny. Do you even know WHAT is an STD? Should I spell it out for you? Sexually Transmitted Diseases. Now you get it? The sexual part? If I dont explain it, it seems like you are not gonna get it. You didnt think about this when you were adding that character were ya? You trynna act like a saint, but nigga are you really gonna wifey and **** someone with AIDS? Is that your idea of decency and morality? You are not being honest, if someone with an STD was in front of you, you wouldnt want to have anything to do with such person not to mention fucking them raw lmao. Funny.

already being contracted by who? WEBNOVEL? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, lmao you consider that being an author? Appreciate? Please, enlighten me. Link me with your properly published and appreciated book. I am actually willingly to buy and support a struggling author XD. You havent replied to my other one incel, where is it? I hAVe BeEn WrITiNG fOr 5 yEarS, dude i have been writing since I went to elementary school, dont get me started on that. Write your book, publish it, get a following, get on Goodreads, get critiqued by actual book critics and then talk. You are not even there kid, dont be cocky. You arent even on top 50 of Webnovel, but talking like you have hit Top 3 and printing your books lmao, delusional much?

I am publishing my writings aren't I? It's right here on Webnovel! And according to the Cambridge dictionary once more an author is the writer of a book, article, play, etc. You cannot deny the title of author to someone who has written something, no matter how bad you think the writing is. Sure you can say the writing is bad, but they are still the author of their work. A person can write a one word novel and publish it and he's still an author of that work. It's not a badge of entitlement that only the elite of the elites can wear. You literally have no idea who the people I mentioned are don't you? You also claimed to have read as many books as the sperms my mother has swallowed. Well sorry to tell you but that number is 0, so I see you're not very well read yourself. Now can we move on with personal attacks and actually talk about the thing you don't like in the story that really don't make sense? Good. Cambridge dictionary said "money", not "living". So no, she is not a whore. If you called her a rape victim, then that would be true. But she's not a whore, like how you're not coherent enough to understand the two differences. Well, it's my fictional world. And in this fictional world that is not related to Earth at all, I have decided to make the setting that there is no such thing as STDs. Why are you trying to dictate the setting of another person's story? You're not my editor. Even if my editor comes here and tells me to change my story's setting, I'll just tell them to go write their own story if they're not happy with it. Much less will I change it for someone like you. Love is much more than just sex boy. I can tell you've never felt that before. I'll just also address your other review here too. "Link me with your properly published and appreciated book. I am actually willingly to buy and support a struggling author" No, I can tell that you are not willing to do so. What you are willing to do is to put down new authors who look like easy targets to you. You have not an inch of supportive bone in your body. " hAVe BeEn WrITiNG fOr 5 yEarS, dude i have been writing since I went to elementary school, dont get me started on that. Write your book, publish it, get a following, get on Goodreads, get critiqued by actual book critics and then talk. " Yes, I have only been writing professionally for an audience for 5 years. I am publishing it online. It's the 21st century, not all books needs to be printed on ink and paper. We are trying to save the environment aren't we? I do have a following which is already evident here without me linking you elsewhere. I too am getting critique by book critiques, you're one aren't you? Anyone in the whole internet can be book critiques because there's not exactly a license for it is there? You have that elitist thinking that only a select few are entitled to these things. "You arent even on top 50 of Webnovel, but talking like you have hit Top 3 and printing your books lmao, delusional much?" Yeah, I can't compare to the current top 50, much less the top 3. My novel has literally less than half their chapters and was published barely 3 weeks ago so obviously I can't fight with the big names now. Would I like to be there one day? Sure. So I can only continue improving myself until I'm there. At least I'm not delusional. Right, that's all the personal attacks accounted for, anything else little troll?

Ahahahahahahahha, have you been watching and taping your parents having sex or sth? That was the worst thing to reply to lmao, i can tell you have never argued with someone online before. I am sorry but your definition of author is outright dog****. You are disgracing the countless authors who have studied years and years of undergraduate study, masters study and so on, struggling to write and come up with something really original while fending for themselves. You haven't written a single orignal **** here buddy, you cant even talk about being an author. You have literally taken the whole premise of the story, almost the same original concepts, characters and everything and is claiming that you are an author now. YOU are the troll here, trolling the entire community of struggling authors who have ACTUALLY published their ORIGINAL books, whether is it online or physical, by claiming that you are a seasoned author, claiming to have an actual following, claiming to have actually done something. NO. Lmao, you are ****ting on generations of people who have actually devoted themselves to writing, studying and perfecting their art, while claiming your "fanfiction" as something of almost equal stature to theirs(you haven said it explicitly, but you have implicitly said so if u cant understand what i mean and has to go resort to cambridge to refute me). Why did you even mention Dante, dude? You have literally nothing in common at all. Yours is almost a full literal copy of the story written on this site, atleast the whole beginning part, which instantly cuts you off from the ones you just mentioned. What is this following you are talking about? You mean the 18 people who reviewed your book, of which half are most likely bots? Or the views you have on your book? or the 100 power stones you have on it? or the 200+ position your book is in? The so called authors you all claim to be form this site, most of them hav elike 10 different "books" they have started and havent finished. Is that what oyu call authorship? Has the position fallen so low now? That imbeciles like you can claim to be a successsful one now? You have offered me literally 0 proof that you are an accomplished writer, with an accomplished book, with an accomplished following and has earned money from selling the "completed" books you are selling. That is what makes a successful writer. Where are these "completed books"? If you dont even have one completed book, who the **** do you think you are fooling by claiming to be an author? What gives you such audacity and courage to claim that your "fanfiction, pffft" is accomplished, something even those who have LITERALLY printed and published their books dont claim to be. Lets just be clear, you are just some random dude on this random ass site that almost no one aside from the minor community of webnovel readers know about, and is claiming to be something that you aren't. You have given me 0 reason to even slightly believe that you are an actual author and a writer. Not even the top 10 of this site can claim to be actual book unless people acutally BUY their book, which some of them are. But you arent one of them buddy, and honestly I dont think you are qualified to claim such bull****.