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DiosMonarca
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2020-07-05 08:57

me gusto al principio fue bueno lo que no me gusto fue despues del capitulo 100 el personaje principal es el mismo idiota de siempre no usa casi su poder deja que le insulten todo casi cada minuto ,que le roben ladrones que nisiquiera tienen cultivo muchas veces con la tonta excusa de que le enseña humildad y amor a sus discípulos y esto se repite muchas veces,deja que alumnos de su propia secta lo desprecien por el simple echo de que no saben su cultivo ya que el no les muestra y se queda callado con cada insulto que se le dice,otro punto es que cuando decide visitar a su familia de que su padre y hermano lo sigan insultando a el y sus discípulos y aún se queda callado y no se defiende,deja que su familia conspire contra el y no se defiende, solo sus discípulos tienen las pelotas que el no tiene para terminar con su familia. Otro punto no me gusta el yaoi y esta novela tiene mucha tendencia yaoi entre los capítulos 100 y 200, si va ser yaoi pone la etique nomas para que abisen a las personas como yo que no les gusta este genero y si no la basa a poner corregí tu tendencia de poner yaoi en algunos capítulos,madicion!!! el MC casi besa a un chico en un capitulo, casi de el libro por ese capitulo. Ultimo punto desde el capitulo 221 asta el 224 es pura basura porque resalta todos los puntas que dije,el MC no tiene ni un poco de bolas ni de cerebro, deja que un simple guardia del gremio le falte al respeto tanto solo porque no conoce su identidad y lo peor que que aguanta todo desprecio y le dice con una sonrisa que po***vor lo guíe,lo mismo en los siguientes capítulos aguanta el desprecio todo el personal del gremio y por último recién rearciona algo y muy poco al desprecio y lo mismo sigue en los siguientes capítulos. Solo digo todos esos problemas se podía haber resuelto de antemano si solo mostraba su cultivo al guardia para no tener que aguantar todo ese desprecio y falta de total atención y el mismo lo dice en el cap 224 . Por todas estas razones es que dejo este libro. Ya no puedo mas, siento que si sigo leyendo este libro pueda terninar suicidandome de la frustración de tener un MC tan tonto e idiota Yo esperaba que mejora la personalidad del MC cuando la historia avanzara pero siguió empeorando y se iso insoportable. Muy lindo es tu historia todo execto el MC ¡¡¡¡¡¡Ya no puedo mas lo odiooooooooo, es la primera ves que odio tanto a un MC Ahhhaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!

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Gracias. Iba a seguir leyendo por si el MC tomaba las riendas en algún momento, pero me ahorraste un montón de tristezas. También detesto esa clase de personajes.

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