Not bad so far, I like the more interactive system . I might change my rating later but, wanted to give author more chance to improve without a too negative of a review as their 1st one.
Arthrall
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LIKEI'm sorry. I can't say yet. The story is at the starting stage for both of them. So like I said, it may or may not happen.
newthings:no? yes?
LokiJoker:How is it rated 5 when I rated it 4, and I'm the only review?