Review Detail of Jack_Smith_2344 in My Magical System

Holy hell is the guy a dumbass! He was in a university before he died but still acts like fucking middle school student in front of girls. He is super beta. His intelligence is below a kindergartners. I get that he was outcast before dying but still in his whole fucking he has not met a single woman? Even if he was virgin this level of idiocy at seeing girls is too much. And of course every fucking girls he lays eyes on falls for him for no apparent reason at all. It's like the author stopped trying. At least make up some bullshit reason. Everything is just handed to him. And translation quality is horrible as well. I'm not asking for perfect grammar but at least make it understandable. There are words missing and you can't understand what is happening without reading the whole chapter what the previous paragraph was about.