Review Detail of Jackjacx in The Devil's Escapade(Adult Novel)
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This is honestly a waste of time first of all he's way too overpowered and making four additional infinity Stones where stupid since the original six had powers and effect the ones you made up had so the ones you made where unnecessary which makes them useless have you ever read a comic or you just got all your knowledge from the movie and second making him be a pervert at birth is stupid and your Grammer is off sometimes
The Devil's Escapade(Adult Novel)
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Sir.. you should have read the tag and maybe ask your ESL teacher to know if my grammar was wrong, if there was wrong in my grammar.. better mark it into paragraph comment and let us see if they are wrong.. I don't care if he was too OP. because this was a fanfic and not the movie or comics of marvel.. so I can do whatever I want with this the story that even adding a Godzilla as a gem.. I can also do that because this was not a story of Stan Lee... hahaha.. this was an Ad,ult Novel..