Review Detail of Jay_II in Dark Winged Angel

This review was written with such horrid formatting to explain by example. Let me say this; the reason for the single star in Writing Quality is because EVERY line and a half paragraph spacing is used for no evident reason. I tried reading it as an obscure poetic form, but it did not help with how choppy the writing felt. It felt as though my brain were being battered, not a present experience I can assure you. Computers may not have the same formatting problems as phones, but as a lot of readers use hand-held devices it may be prudent to check how your writing appears on small screens. Ignoring the spacing issues, the actual writing was quite good, with few tense or punctuation errors. 4-5 stars. Fleeing before I read all current chapters, I cannot say if the rating given was accurate, but what I perused was pretty good. Ps. Hey Author! Your review is no longer alone! 😋