Review Detail of Hati_3317 in Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

Writing Quality 3/5 - Please get an editor or use something similar to grammarly. There are lots of mistakes (it's still readable though) in grammar (and spelling in some cases). Updates 5/5 - One chapter a day, pretty good and chapters aren't too short. Story Development 4/5 - It's alright. Character Design 4/5 - Honestly the only character we really get a lot of development in is Zatiel, and not even that much. Other characters like his 2 most trusted subordinates, all their development is "they have strong wills, now stronger wills and they trust mc a lot, now trust mc more" and Sofia (which a lot of people didn't like, I didn't either but thankfully she became less clingy later on) suddenly develops feelings for the mc which is a bit out of nowhere imo (its from like 1 chapter to another that she suddenly loves him lol) World Background 4/5 - It's interesting and unique, with lots of different paths from the magus one which adds variety to each character's fighting style and stuff. But so far we don't really know a lot about the world itself, so 4 stars. Overall 4/5 - Give it a read. It's fun though the first few chapters can be a bit tedious so keep that in mind. Good job author :) and don't drop this please. Edit: Deleted my other review and reposted this since for some reason it showed my reading status as 0.