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Killerbee
KillerbeeAuthor5yr
2019-10-26 08:58

I will be shameful here and give my novel a 5 stars. You have read my previous novels, then you will know that I am trying to write a showbiz novel for a long time and this was the piece I ultimately wrote with my current skill. It will be a long journey and the MC will slowly reach the top. The novel would have elements from other showbiz novels like Top management and God of music but I will keep the plot as original as I can. The start of this story is actually from a novel i had read a long time ago and then, the setting would change as soon as he enters a agency. There would many new characters and some potential love interest but I will go with a Yandere for the main heroine. If you have any thoughts about this novel and how can I make it more good, do tell me in the comments and please review this novel.

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newthings
newthingsLv6

is it harem?

Killerbee
KillerbeeAuthor

It will not be a harem but there would 2/3 girls liking mc.

newthings:is it harem?
Muspon
MusponLv13

aye so you're back i loved your last series the entertainment king a shame you dropped it it was quite good

Killerbee:It will not be a harem but there would 2/3 girls liking mc.
Zaneta_Abekhe_1568
Zaneta_Abekhe_1568Lv11

J’adore ❤️❤️

Melshan
MelshanLv7

The MC Will have a girlfriend?

FBI_B1TCH
FBI_B1TCHLv14

Just seeing yandere is enough for me to start reading this

Lord_Bebe
Lord_BebeLv14

Hey Killerbee, I really like your novel. There is one point which i wanted to ask which was if you could get a proofreader for your story, because i find it quite sad that such a gem of a story breaks immersion because of grammatic errors😔. I am sadly not a native speaker myself so i know that it can be quite difficult but since you've gone premium i think that you will need a proofreader to get more people to immerse themself into your story. I will continue reading your story of course since i like it a lot and had deep regrets about IRAS for example😊👌

50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Every time I read a yandere fanfiction , the mc is a total b*tch to the yandere girlfriend 😭😭 I mean ide like it if she was bat sh*t crazy in love with mc but doesn’t you know , abuse him..... Is that how yanderes are like cause I tend to avoid them

FBI_B1TCH:Just seeing yandere is enough for me to start reading this
FBI_B1TCH
FBI_B1TCHLv14

Depends on the yandere. Typically, yanderes are usually just extremely possessive of their lover and will even resort to violence sometimes to keep other men/women away. Some extreme cases however (like Yuno Gasai), will even harm the target of their affection if it means they can be together.

50ShadesOfAss:Every time I read a yandere fanfiction , the mc is a total b*tch to the yandere girlfriend 😭😭 I mean ide like it if she was bat sh*t crazy in love with mc but doesn’t you know , abuse him..... Is that how yanderes are like cause I tend to avoid them
50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Man , maybe I’m just unlucky.... ide only go as far as reader the ones who resort to violence or harming Others , other than their lover..... Or maybe a male yandere possessive mc, haven’t read that in a while while

FBI_B1TCH:Depends on the yandere. Typically, yanderes are usually just extremely possessive of their lover and will even resort to violence sometimes to keep other men/women away. Some extreme cases however (like Yuno Gasai), will even harm the target of their affection if it means they can be together.
jaeyuk
jaeyukLv5

The yandere girl heroine was a cute concept but I don't think it's working out. I hope you change your mind.

SapphireKiss
SapphireKissLv3

I like the yandere girl. Pls don't change her. Haha

k0001c99
k0001c99Lv4

*shameless lol

Yasmin_Elkhazendar
Yasmin_ElkhazendarLv5

I like your honesty

Harshvardhan_Bisht
Harshvardhan_BishtLv1

Hi killerbee...just a general question...Are you from Bihar?

Killerbee
KillerbeeAuthor

Yes, I am from Bihar. I don't live in Patna though, just a small district. If you want, message me on discord at Killerbee#4748

Harshvardhan_Bisht:Hi killerbee...just a general question...Are you from Bihar?
JOYcutie
JOYcutieLv4

Same here don't like yandere

jaeyuk:The yandere girl heroine was a cute concept but I don't think it's working out. I hope you change your mind.
ikka
ikkaLv13

Cool ty for the info.. then i can drop it now insted of later...

Ranim_Rannou
Ranim_RannouLv1

Actually I loved your novel very much and I hope you Will continue on the same level

haglSOPP
haglSOPPLv4

The novel is really good, author-nim! Don't let those comments shake you. You have great support from us. Continue with FL yandere, please. LOL. It was this tag (yandere) that attracted me to the novel. Also, continue with monogamy, harem will ruin your work, just like it ruined many other works with great potential. Develop your characters more and more - especially FL, as there are people who don't like her attitude, even though I love LOL - and the story will become perfect. I will support you more and more! You can expect my support!

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