Review Detail of Har_V in The Devil's little Villainess
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As this is the custom of authors to review their own book... As a shameless author, even I am following it. I am also the author of Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO.... I can assure you that the story will not be a routine one. This is a reincarnation story with revenge, mysteries, family, friends, romance... There will be no any major misunderstandings or sad scenes.... I honestly hope you all will like it Thank you ♥♥♥♥
The Devil's little Villainess
Har_V
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That’s a really interesting synopsis. I’m torn though. I don’t see how his fake friend who was a lying backstabber should deserve to get reincarnated or to get “revenge”. Based on the synopsis, Jasper and Linda probably both got screwed over by her and the people she was working with, yet she’s the one who gets a second chance? One act at the end shouldn’t be able to make up for all the stuff she did. It doesn’t make sense to me to give the traitorous back stabber a second chance at love instead of Jasper or Linda, especially since she ends up in Linda’s body. It’s your novel so obviously you can write it however you want and I’m sure it’s probably really good. I just don’t understand why the traitor/villainess is the one getting “rewarded” versus the other two mentioned in the synopsis. Poor real Linda and Jasper, especially now that she’s in Linda’s body - she’ll be deceiving Jasper yet again since he thinks it’s Linda. Definitely not your typical plot.