Review Detail of Primordial_Origin in The Gluttonus Beast
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I just read till chapter 3 + 2 prologue then dropped. I'm the type of reader who likes to read stories with logical concepts otherwise I get headaches just by trying to understand things. I'm a daydreamer so I mostly read to increase my repertoire of things to imagine basically to get inspiration. So I mainly choose to read stories I find interesting (mainly based on synopsis). I read yours meaning I did find it interesting. What I usually do is primarily understand something then visualize it. This is my main form of entertainment when reading and creates the most immersion for me. One of the things really important to me is the concept of "power levels" and yours is just broken for me, can't see it or imagine it. I don't really like the DBZ verse but I still searched it up and understand some things and with my understanding of Zeno is, then you're God rankings is just absurd for me (Zeno is the weakest of the weakest out of all 8 major realms with even more 5 sub-realm per major realm). Now, I wouldn't normally write a review just because of that but I read through all your story's reviews (17 of them to be precise) and none of them are constructive. Might as well all be considered bogus reviews to make your rating higher, except for three...one being the author, another which didn't really say much, and the last one which didn't even read but I understand his reason why he did so. So, I wrote this to counterbalance the overall rating, provide another real review, and show a more realistic overall story rating. Hope the author doesn't mind. Thanks for writing your story anyway. Good luck with your academics and writing endeavor. P.S. Sorry if you received too many notifications. I keep deleting it due to typos.
The Gluttonus Beast
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Its alright, I guess I may need to be more clear with the power leveling and scaling, but to clear up some of it. If you may see this in the future. The weakest God level is Zeno level, because all these Gods can destroy universes like him. I was just trying to provide an example, the higher the level doesn't necessarily mean, "I'm Zeno but 2x", but more like a slightly more powerful, versatile god, not just "With a wave I'm my hand, your universe is now gone." So to make this short, to be considered a God, you need to be able to destroy universes, not easily but you shouldn't be winded from it. Also, the whole Gods thing isn't even important until very later into the story, they were just a concept that if a powerful enemy to came into the story later on it would make some sense, and not just slap it onto the reader's face.
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