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Anthony_Essex
Anthony_EssexLv54yr
2020-03-26 22:30

I love your story here the MC feels very real and his problems very relatable. I like his interactions with the main cast and how he uses his knowledge without making everything the plot set up for the story useless. MY only problem is the lack of updates. This could go far if you updated more often

RWBY: The Butterfly Effect

EternalEden
4.7
52 Chs

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EternalEden
EternalEdenAuthor

Nothing to see here folks, certainly not, just giving a shameless self-review to get the number count up to ten reviews. Nope, not at all...

3yr

Alyss
AlyssLv15

I came expecting a self insert fantasy Into the RWBY series and left refreshed and suprised. The writing quality is phenomenal and the writer seems genuinely passionate about making the story his own by including perspectives from both worlds. I can only hope the author continues to make quality content and proceeds with his own vision of the world of RWBY to the end.

4yr
Arthur_Umbridge
Arthur_UmbridgeLv1

This story is well written so far. I like how more details are explored that weren't in the show and it seems Nate/Aero seems to be causing changes that will cause differences in what happened in the previous timeline. I didn't expect it to be funny, but it also was XD. I wonder how he plans to stop the fall of Vale, telling Ozpin about it would be my guess...

5yr
Sin_of_sloth
Sin_of_slothLv5

It's good but i don't know how you are goin to handle the latest development. It can be either the best or a really bad rwby fanfic . .........

4yr
Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv5

Alr chief Imma drop a 5 just because RWBY. Anyway I'll be joining you on this journey as my first chapter will be read after this review. Hopefully others join me as well seeing as the reviews are positive

2yr
DaoistbS2nuH
DaoistbS2nuHLv1

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2yr
Whodo_The_Voodo
Whodo_The_VoodoLv1

So glad that the main character is not on Team RWBY like some of the other garbage rwby fics out there. I've seen some pretty cringe ones out there.

3yr
Na1gel
Na1gelLv4

the writing is gold ! the story is interesting as well you should really try it the characters are believable and make sense? now onto what i don't like so here we go.... I HATE your mc he is coming off as a creep and a retard/fool at every chance he get he actually make Jaune look like a cool handsome boy who has his shit together and that's just embarrassing and I've read up to 13 chapters and i srsly have not 1 good thing to say about him .. he thinks like a monkey he acts like a fool idiot/retard.. so its the first time for me that this is happening... so weird i like the story very much but i hate the mc with my soul soooo many mixed signals here

4yr
RaulXD
RaulXDLv4

de lo mejor que e leído, me gusta el balance de la historia. Un Mc que no es OP y logra agradar. Ya que un MC débil es mucho más difícil de contruir sin resultar ser molesto. El único problema es la falta de caput

4yr
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