Review Detail of The_Canary in The Adventures of Treasure Hunters - 1 season

I was thrilled when I read the synopsis since it's a refreshing plot about adventurers of our world. When I read the chapters, I was impressed with pacing, but there were some grammatical errors need to be corrected. There were some okay or tolerable errors, but there were errors that made the sentence construction mean differently from the intended message. I have to reread it to understand completely the intended message. But overall, it was a refreshing story!