Review Detail of CherShootX in The Adventures of Treasure Hunters - 1 season

Item: The Adventures of Treasure Hunters - 1 season
Rating: 4.4

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CherShootXLv64yrCherShootX

The premise is quite interesting, but maybe you shouldn't add too many comas in sentence and try to merge them instead. But except some grammatical error here and there, there wasn't anything bad in this novel. Looking to see when the Author became better at English, it would definitely a good novel to read.

The Adventures of Treasure Hunters - 1 season

Gourmet_DAO

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Gourmet_DAOAuthorGourmet_DAO

Thank you for your honest review! I try now to double-check my text before publishing and not immediately fill in the raw materials. I will try to correct the errors you indicated. But the grammar is still raw. With appreciation

4yr

CherShootXLv6CherShootX

Ups, forgot to mention but try using Grammarly. The trial mode is good enough to help you correct simple problem. I use it and it's good.

4yr