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Sigheti
SighetiLv45yr
2020-01-11 04:24

Beautifully written and highly immersive, this story has been a pleasure to read. Grammar and vocabulary are all impeccable. The characters have great potential and continue to entertain me. A more elaborate feedback, as was promised, has been posted in the forum, as the word count did not allow me to post it here.

The undead and her useless Master

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Slewis
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I actually enjoyed reading this quite a bit, you write very well and I have no real mistakes to point out either. The concept is pretty new for me since it's a little outside the genre I normally read but even still it's an amazing Novel. I just added you to my library as well so keep up the good work!

5yr

TheSpiderNextDoor
TheSpiderNextDoorAuthor

This author started this story spontaneously. The story seems to move with no direction, and leaves more to be desired in world-building and characters! More sporadic than its creation is when the author decides to update...

5yr
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

4yr
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